
Anyone would fall in love with such a beauty! I fathom myself, as "The Man" whom she also loves, and I would like to describe her, as "My Priya Sakhi."
My Priya Sakhi...
Today, I am elited
To see you sitting on the banks,
To see you searching for me,
To see you getting restless and
To see you waiting for me.
Let me describe you, in my own sweet words,
You are My Goddess, You are My love.
The darkness that envelopes the sky,
Is nothing but your long strands of hair,
The moon ,who boasts of her beauty,
Today, is in utter despair!
Oh my Dainty Darling!
When I see your little forehead,
Shining with a starry Bindi,
I am tempted to adorne it with Sindoor,
In the deep colour Red.
The dark black eyebrows,
and the battling eyelashes,
bringout your passionate eyes,
lashes me with love and passion,
And I have no choice of words,
To show my love and compassion.
Now that, I am almost here,
Your lovely golden cheeks,
blush into the colour of apples,
your lustrous lips, open into smile,
Remind me of tender pink rose petals.
I envy those lovely necklaces,
That dangle around your slender neck,
And the jewellery made of rubies and pearls,
Are lucky to be on your ears.
You look like an Heavenly Angel,
Born in the world the stars,
Two brave kings should see you now,
Hehe,they would be waging wars!
As I walk closer to you,I am captured by your womanhood,
You turn away from me, giving a subtle smile.
I choose to hold your lovely hands,
And very soon, I know, they are going to be mine.
As I try to hold you tight, very close to me,
The soft and cold wind blows,
I see your golden anklets,
I can hear them chime,
My Goddess , My love,My Priya Sakhi,
I am Waiting for you to be Mine!
In response to Chitrakaar's She is waiting for someone......Call for the needy.
All your comments and suggestions mean a lot to me... So please let me know on how I am doing!
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do not know how i missed this one
v beautifully expressed
loved every nuance depicted in raja ravi varma's painting
saw a collection of his in new delhi museum of modern art i think
. stately collection
lol
bina
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I came here because well I call him sakha...and here you talk of sakhi.
then i loved the painting...it looks like one of raja ravi verma.
nice poem...
bmw.
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The poem has a touch of the Indian culture. It's been very well-versed, depicting the beauty of a woman in very suitable words. The poem is very good, but I think it would have brought out more feelings had it been written in any of the Indian languages.
A good poem to read.
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thanks Tanushri!
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Meera
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Hey, that's a beautiful painting.. I think you are right.. she seems to be waiting.. and you are doing fine... don't worry...keep going....
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Sampathji..
Thank you! Gald that u enjoyed it!
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Meera
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very beautifully written
enjoyed it.
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Thankyou Geeta for those lovely comments!
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Meera
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That was a lovely poem Meera. Ravi Verma should have been there to hear it.
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Welcome in Meera San! Thanks for ur comments!
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Meera
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